Comments on: Winter

By: Blackpearl

Blackpearl — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 02:03:27 +0000

I agree with Topaz, I loved that line!

Plus the arch in this chick’s back is chill-inducing!!

Petal — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 20:37:30 +0000

A perfect match….image to text….love it!

The Panserbjørne — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 17:26:27 +0000

Oh HELL yes. I’d cover you in a couple of feet of snow, you bet.

(snow…I rather like that imagery, the comparison quite honestly never occurred to me before this).

– PB

Greyrake — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 17:19:58 +0000

This just has the lilt and language and feel of a good Chicago fuck. You’ll have to tell us your impressions.

A great coupling (or tripling?) ought to have a sense of place.

Topaz — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 16:53:55 +0000

“write about it, as if it happened / but–don’t tell”

I love this line… it sums up a lot of what we do.