commanded–I begged
hands free
he choked me
ass up
he smacked me
skirt shoved
stockings split
lips unhinged
authority stripped
primordial
primitivism
finds it way
into my tightest
space
hesitant is my will
eager is my cunt
taking time to instill
sense of emancipation
leaving marks
of his affection
for some reason, the lines “lips unhinged / authority stripped” really give the sense of control being taken in a condoning sort of way…. you wind that sense through the entire piece, “…taking time to instill…” with few short words. Wonderful Vix! Glad you’re up and running now to get gems like this to read!
Quite unusual for most of your poetry, I found myself thinking that these words would actually make a very interesting set of song lyrics. But who’d portray it? Lords of Acid, perhaps; they like sexually explicit songs and this would go well with a techno beat.
– PB
Your writing is always first rate. Very inspired..I wonder what your inspiration was?
Topaz:Thanks for always being a constant! I love and appreciate your read and comments. much love to you.
The Panserbjørne: Lords of Acid, have not heard that name in some time, that would be cool.
Supercock: a good ass fuck, always elicits inspiration.