double standard
tangled devious your solidity distracting
snapshots of autumn orange oblige–professing wit
glossed moments happen, like smooth sunshine
the sluts story mirrors solitary possessed acts
exuded, swallowed static prelude
mishaps, imagining twisted maleness
oversexed systems process dissatisfied understanding
sheer sky and clicking heat
software torture slow solid nibble below
cynical daylight raced and crazed
damned poetry
bloody transcendence instilled
encouragement starts with the belt
lessons spill poppycock–intermittently dead and embarrassed
bared girls increase ridiculous questions
psychotic animal dissipates– soaked and stiff
reboot–trace realization destroyed handfuls of sound vibrations
reaching for time
Double Standard, by Dennis Hopper.
the poem is part of the Exquisite Corpse Web 2.0 series.
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Without poetry there can not be pathos
Wb: thanks for always commenting on my “damned poetry.”
This will require a few rereads for me. It’s so full of information and quick transitions and is an overload to the senses – I like the feel this imparts to the reader. And yes, the ‘damned poetry’ is a great turn. Reminiscent of Yeats.